TONIGHT NO POETRY WILL SERVE
Saw you walking barefoot
taking a long look
at the new moon's eyelid
later spread
sleep-fallen, naked in your dark hair
asleep but not oblivious
of the unslept unsleeping
elsewhere
Tonight I think
no poetry
will serve
Syntax of rendition:
verb pilots the plane
adverb modifies action
verb force-feeds noun
submerges the subject
noun is choking
verbdisgracedgoes on doing
now diagram the sentence
—Adrienne Rich [https://cutt.ly/fQJDZEp]